Poetry / altar call.

saturday nights bring fights
that sunday morning redemption delights in
sin washing words for lost and hopeful souls
cold and shaken, mistaking their prayers
for bargaining chips
but slipping up and falling down
is humane
mainly consisting of momentary lapses
in judgmental stances
cautionary tales of accidental actions
reactions and defenses
all birthed of the belief
that we can earn our salvation
creation’s cry is the same
and all the saints pray
in the name of the Father
and the greatly needed Savior
amen, all men.

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January 18, 2006

nick

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December 21, 2005

Sothanma

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Sothanma reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I particularly like the beggining of this work. The first three lines effectively draw the reader in.

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