Poetry / Tired of things, people, and feelings

I’m tired of being me, of hiding who I really am
Tired of feeling of giving parts of myself to people
Some day I’m going to run out of parts to give, its killing me slowly
Tired of how you should treat people of what you should say, its a bunch of bull and a waste of time
I’m getting sick and tired of people seeming to fake who they really are, but I guess I’m getting a dose of my own medicine, pathetic isn’t it? Yep totally
Do I sound crazy, pathetic, physco? I guess I have issues, big ones
Even though I’m not even 21 yet I’m tired of living and breathing I guess that would mean I haven’t really begun to live yet

Books and music are the only thing I’m not tired of yet, never will either pretty much the only precious thing to me now these days

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September 28, 2007

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Poetic_Journey reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

You are on point to how alot of people feel, myself included. I felt you and understood until the last line. A couple of word changes might explian it better or drop everything after the comma. Other than that, it goes on my fav list.