Poetry / Honest

You know, Ive been noticing that one grammatical error since Ive posted this poem…but im such a heave procrastinator that I havent went in to fix it.  haha. thank you for pointing it out, now I have a reason to change it.
But on another note, thanks a lot for taking the time to read my poetry. As a poet, a human, you are always trying to find that one thing that speaks out to other people, not just to release your thoughts but to find a connection with a total stranger.
its a wonderful thing :)

-kry.

I wanted to write a very basic poem that did not surrender to your overly romantic potrayel of love. Each phrase I used was carefully picked and not necessarily meant to sound nice. I wanted to avoid nice and go right to the truth. I never thought of it as a song, but looking at the poems written position I can see how that would work. I originally had it separated in stanzas (im not sure why i have it displayed this way). I am glad that this poem touched you. It’s always a nice feeling knowing that I was able to provide a connection with a stranger :) Over everything, thank you for taking the time to comment!

-kry.

To tell you the truth, I always felt that the word “heart” is overly used in poetry. The whole concept of the poem was to explain the depth of my love for this person. It is deeper than my heart, it shoots down to my soul, a sacred place. Lol. hopefully not everyone will think of that pop song :) It ruins the mood of the poem. But thank you very much for taking the time to comment! I really appreciate it :)

-kry.