Poetry / Sleeping Angel

Like a magnificent vision, the angel you are
When you are fast asleep your face shines like a star
And the look of a child is what I see
Can’t help but see my destiny

Running my fingers through your head
As you turn so slowly in your bed
While stairing into your face in your silent state of life
I invision us as husband and wife

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September 29, 2007

DarklyBeautiful

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DarklyBeautiful reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I like this cause it’s simple, yet beautiful. I think you did an awesome job. I can’t wait to read more of your pieces. Thankx for reviewing some of my work can’t wait to open it.

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