Lyrics / "The Odyssey of Tallulah Belle"

Slashed wrists in a hot tub
Mermaids, it won’t take long !
My beauty sleep dishevelled
Stolen hairs rubbed by old dirt fingernails

I stare at the fade-lighted ceiling
Surrounding arms around me
Numb, her dyed webs evade
Abroad, casting silly spells in vain

You used to say it would be easy for me to go away but it’s not…
You used to say it would be easy for me to go away but it’s not…
that easy for me to go away
I won’t give you my life away
so easily but I have to say
that I will one of these days

Manipulation. Strings of my corseted body mellow into a deep watered lake. Drawn laces cut off under the knee

Thirst, sighs, sips of useless, iceless whisky glasses
Blood stained gum o’ my razor’s teeth draining exquisite cordials

Swarovski diamonds shone through some foggy havana room

Dark Cinderellas doin’ cocaine aside and unfunny Valentines barking for Candy !

Earring clad, I step away faintly but…

Thomas Judes Kaplan

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December 23, 2007

cooljim102055

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cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

hi there,

well it’s very orginal and creative with your content and the shock value with all the blood, viloence and sadness is also there if that’s what your trying to get across..for it being radio friendly, or publisher friendly i don’t think so..but again..very orginal..good luck