Children's / The Seasons According to Minkey Moo
I know a little girl
A little girl whose age is two
Her name is Elys Rose
But she’s known as Minkey Moo!
Every day is different
Things are mostly fun
Everything is an adventure
To one who is so young
In summer time she plays outside
Without a single care
Splashing in the paddling pool
Getting water in her hair
Running round the park
On the climbing frame and swings
Eating a most gorgeous picnic
Chasing butterflys with pretty wings
In autumn time she collects the leaves
That have fallen to the ground
She flies a kite on windy days
And plays with conkers she has found
She loves to go on walks
Playing peek-a-boo behind the trees
Her cheeks are pink and rosy
Because of the cold and blustery breeze
In winter time she wraps up warm
Walking to and from her school
She’s excited its her birthday soon
She’ll be the princess at her ball
Her nose pressed against the window
Watching snowflakes gently fall
Then running round trying to catch them
And throwing snowballs at the wall
In spring time she runs round like a little lamb
Her eyes as bright as the sky
Lying down in grassy fields
Watching the clouds float gently by
She loves paddling in the river
Catching tadpoles in the stream
And when she goes to sleep at night
She says the fairies help her dream
I know a little girl
A little girl whose nearly three
Her name is Elys Rose
But she’s Minkey Moo to me
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I liked this. The rhythm seems to be off a bit in parts of it, but after reading it aloud, most everything works. The line “In spring time she runs round like a little lamb” seems a little long . I might leave out the word time. Nice job
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I think that is very well written. It’s a very cute story that paints a very vivid picture of this little girl on the reader’s head. I like the rhyme scheme and the repitition of the first stanza. Good job.
I absolutely loved reading your writing. I have a small child of my own, so it was appeasing to read!
It leads you on this life of a small child’s adventures. I love it!
I hope to read more of your work!
Thanks!
I think it is very sweet. Great child’s eye view.I probably wouldn’t have referred to the picnic as gorgeous- tasty perhaps or even scrumptious. My kids like it too.
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