Poetry / Voice of the Earth

Hear the lyre of time, listen to the whispering wind
Feel the pulse of nature, see the great dance of the waves
Touch the proud veins of the earth, touch the womb of ages
Sound the depth of the sun, awaken the soul of life
In joyous songs of birds, find the messengers of time
And through the specter of life the voice of the earth;

Feel the pulsations of the rivers, dance to the drums of the seas
Hear the silent flutes of eons, signatures of the currents find
Embrace the arms of the forest, relish in her timeless cuddle
Fetch the jeweled leaves, onto the shores of the now,
Bathe in the showers of ethers, speak the language of the spheres
And in the light of self the voice of the earth;

Marvel at the peaks of the hills, and the bowels of the mountains
See the beauty of the ants, envy the harmony in their hills
Drink the nectar of flowers, the sweet wine of the bees
Praise the lilies of the valleys, sing the tunes of the trees
Yield to the call of the stars, sway to the caress of the moon
Above all, listen to the voice of the earth.

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November 10, 2007

brand_new_kate

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brand_new_kate reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I like this very much. However, it reads very fast. Perhaps one could linger over each element more if the writing was slowed down a bit. The imagery is beautiful!