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I love this piece! Especially the title is effective in this format!

What is more natural than pregnancy?

Wow. Suddenly the title made total sense. Um… hope everything turns out the way you, er… want it to.

I know what they say about nature. I consider this included in nature.
It certainly touches on what it is to be human.

brilliant. and a fantastic note for reviewers, and a noble goal

Well it give an image to the reader. I pictured you standing over the bath room sink looking into the mirror while thinking this. Better get the test strips.

Rather limericy I felt and closer to a senryu rather than an haiku. If what I know of women is true, you seem to be rather happy with the thought, yes?

Okay, I hope that for you too. Is it wrong to laugh? I think it’s kinda funny. I can imagine you checking that blue stick over and over…I really hope
You get the answer that you need.

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October 08, 2007

by FrumpBurger

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haha. naw, it’s all good to laugh. hey—at least it gave you a visual, right? heehee.

October 09, 2007

by PurlDruid

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We all must laugh to get over the mountain :}
Good luck. Btw- LOVE your screenname!!!! hahahahaha

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It’s Senryu, not Haiku, and a rather cute Senryu at that. Hopefully you just ate some bad Chinese food ;-)

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October 08, 2007

by FrumpBurger

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i can never remember the word senryu. heh.

HEY URBIS, MAKE A SENRYU OPTION!!! =p

i’m glad you think it’s cute.

and yeah—here’s hoping. =)

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