Poetry / Checkmate.

A dark and twisted cabaret, my life beyond this date.
He laughs and sips in chardonnay, and tells me of my fate.
I stop my thoughts in disarray, and quickly take the bait.
Behind the bright-lit alleyway, the Man he yells checkmate.

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November 01, 2007

Vincent_Gosheaf

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63	66.7% (6 votes)	29.0%

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19	M	Australia	November 10

Vincent_Gosheaf reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I wish that there was more that I could say, I love it and wish that I had written it. Checkmate gets the first 10 that I’ve ever given.

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October 24, 2007

arualsuga

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329	60.6% (33 votes)	39.8%

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18	F	Australia	October 17

arualsuga reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

wow. that sounds really pretty :) but you failed two of your goals firstly because you couldn’t get any better if you tried, and secondly because i’m not a professional publisher. but it sounds pretty :)