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My love for you is so uncontainble it won’t fit in this heart shaped box.

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Nvr2Young2Write avatar General Stranger

February 22, 2008

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November 15, 2007

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You could buy a bigger box.

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November 14, 2007

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I like the idea behind this. I do want to mention that it doesn’t seem to make complete sense. Most people get the idea that ‘uncontainable’ means it can’t be forced into confinement. Maybe replace it with a word that goes better along with ‘big’ where it cant go into the box becuase of size. It just sounds like the love is too immense in size.
Good work.

sione avatar General Stranger

November 14, 2007

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I don’t know. It’s kind of awkward. Uncontainable isn’t a word I would use.

“My love for you won’t fit in this heart shaped box.” or “No heart shaped box could contain my love for you.”

Not as clumsy but they still get the message across. The Nirvana reference is spot-on though.

barb avatar General Stranger

November 08, 2007

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Great quote, but i gave a lower rating because it isn’t really all original.

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November 07, 2007

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It is heart warming.

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November 06, 2007

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un-containable describes love very well for no one can control or contain it; love is a free bird, dandelion seeds in the wind.
typo “uncontainble”
Really good quote

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