Poetry / Hooky

Another brilliant piece.  These should be immortalized as part of the modern experience.  You are an extremely adept young poet.  I look forward to being a part of some rebirth of the collective poetic voice with you.  There hasn’t been a good movement in a while.  Speak for yourself, she said.

Hi,
How CUTE and CLEVER is this? Just wonderful and I got a chuckle out of it.

I would though however, change the “5” to 5:00.

This is great!

Take care….

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May 02, 2008

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thank you very much!

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haha! it’s clever i love it. examining every word for something to criticize made me feel guilty, there is nothing. cute!

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December 08, 2007

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thank you!  i think the form is a little labored, but i’ve read it so many times now i don’t know how to rearrange it.

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Great job. Quick, crisp, to the point. Makes me want to shout “She’s at the park!” and trip her at the same time. Excellent.

Vindictive and fun.  Love it.  

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December 03, 2007

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thank you.  : >

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