Quotes / The Hole

I wish I could jump down my hole, to die beside my victims.

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npr33 avatar General Stranger

December 07, 2007

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December 05, 2007

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Why? And why are they your victims? This is a start, but seems to be lacking a solid core reason or purpose to having you wish such a fate upon yourself.

Frogking avatar General Stranger

November 25, 2007

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Macabre and great. “Just missing quotation marks.”

alone363 avatar General Friend

November 18, 2007

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Now what should i write here.Seriously ,not to hurt you, this is jsut average ,quotes should be something which enlighten/increase wisdom/ or atleast make people laugh, or else they are simple insane talk.But as per your imagination, i can see that you can write better…All the best, waiting for your next quotation.Thank you for being here in Urbis, Greetings from India

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November 15, 2007

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Scary.

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November 15, 2007

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i like the darkness of it, it sounds like a good quote form a story with troubled protogonist.
In short good work, it appealed to me, but not exactly the way you may have wanted it to.
Gavinwar

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November 15, 2007

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Yikes!

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November 15, 2007

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Well, it’s not much of a quote , if nobody actually said it, now is it?

Mario007 avatar General Stranger

November 15, 2007

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Its a little bit too emo for my liking, although you said you don’t want to do this. Maybe something mroe cheerful would work better in this sense, try to think about that

filbert avatar General Stranger

November 15, 2007

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Oh, that is a bit unusual-
However, it is awesome!!!!!!!!

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