Poetry / snowfield

Snowflakes carelessly drifting on our heads,
alone in a tranquil white landscape,
a slow embrace with blushing cheeks,
slowly our lips meet,
serenity forever in a place with no time.

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January 17, 2008

Sparkles

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Sparkles reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

I like it, a great moment captured well.

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January 02, 2008

jweeble

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jweeble reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

That was absolutely beautiful. Some will say cliched metaphors, but that doesn’t change the lush, tender feeling that this gave me.

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19	M	Canton, NC	September 06

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