Poetry / snowfield
Snowflakes carelessly drifting on our heads,
alone in a tranquil white landscape,
a slow embrace with blushing cheeks,
slowly our lips meet,
serenity forever in a place with no time.
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jweeble reviewed Version 1 -
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That was absolutely beautiful. Some will say cliched metaphors, but that doesn’t change the lush, tender feeling that this gave me.
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Sparkles reviewed Version 1 -
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I like it, a great moment captured well.
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