Lyrics / Why won't this cold leave me?
(chorus)
If the cold on the mountain turns to rain,
The rain makes a stream,
The stream makes a river,
And the river fills the sea,
Why won’t this cold leave me?
(verse 1)
It’s been a while since I sailed
Through strawberry-flavoured days,
My greenhouse has failed
And shattered in decay.
(verse 2)
I’ve been searching for a muse
On icy Mount Parnassus,
But the virgin snow I used
Has turned to ashes.
(bridge)
It’s so sublime, I’ve lost myself
Beyond even an echo.
But, in time, I’ve found myself
So cold with all I’ve let go.
(chorus)
If the cold on the mountain turns to rain,
The rain makes a stream,
The stream makes a river,
And the river fills the sea,
Why won’t this cold leave me?
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i think your lyrics were great. If i heard this song i think it might calm me down. I loved how expressive you are. Keep writing!
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hi there,
very creative i must say..(maybe to deep for a love song for the common listener to grab on too..i think a great song is one of love/orginallity/and simplicity..nice job in general..
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