Haiku/Senryu / requiem for an inner
intentions quite strong
nestled victim paralyzed
by the bitter night
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ScottBJohnson reviewed Version 3 -
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Dissonance, discomfort, disharmony… and let’s not forget freaking cold! Very unsettling picture.
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humandetails reviewed Version 3 -
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Yes, unsettling is correct. However, this seems almost like a simple chunk of fact. Where is the message? Where is the answer to the “So What???” ?
Red_dot reviewed Version 3 -
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I am at odds whose intentions ? the bitter night?
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