Limericks / LET'S FACE IT

The earthworm has no way of knowing
Just whether he’s coming or going.
   So which is it, friend?
   Your front or your end?
Just which pair of cheeks are you showing?

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easywriter57 avatar General Stranger

December 24, 2007

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This is quite creative. Funny how worms can be cut in half and grow another half-I never know which end is up either.

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December 24, 2007

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December 18, 2007

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This is a sound limerick, although I have to say, the first two lines I got a strong sense of deja vu.  It isn’t written after another similar limerick is it?  Aside from that, the rhythm worked well, and I smiled at the last line; clever.  Middle lines were a bit contrived, but that made it funnier.  Keep ‘em coming.

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December 17, 2007

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December 16, 2007

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December 14, 2007

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December 11, 2007

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Willy Wonka! I want chocolate, now. Sorry for the ratings, but I didn’t think you were being serious considering….

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December 08, 2007

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its clever. made me laugh. so is the subject a worm or a friend who’s a worm, or just a dubious friend? that is not entirely clear.

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December 07, 2007

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December 06, 2007

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