Poetry / Things Have Changed

The day has come to grow up, and quit caring what everyone thinks all the time
You hurt me deep, I wish I hadn’t been so stupid to think you cared
I’ll be forever marked inside by your presence and your words
Do you hate me? I wonder, but it doesn’t matter anymore I’ve found someone who actually seems to care for me
I’ll admit that you were bad for me, a drug that was hard to kick but I did it your no longer in my system to pollute me or my spirit
Sometimes I regret having had you in my life for awhile but the other side is glad you were cause then I won’t be so careless next time around
I have learned one thing though I’ll never let anyone as deep and as close as I let you in no one wil ever hurt me so deep ever again
Was I just a game for you and your friends? Was I joke to you?
God how I wish I hadn’t been so open and caring, it only gets you hurt
And I may not be beautiful or smart but I pity you because even though you have tons of friends and you think your such a bad ass at least I’m happy, your just miserable

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December 01, 2007

metalmadcat

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metalmadcat reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Drastic Resents in about every single line. Very evident.

When I read the first line though, it gave me a relief for you will learn that being resentful is the most immature feeling in the world.
So did you succeed? If you wanted to show resent you certainly did, good job.

It flows good enough.
It’s not my favorite style hating people for the sake of caring oneself or things like that yet It has my respect -of course.

Hatred is everywhere.mm..