Poetry / Rain Drops

Look at that below there
cant you see all the green
the flowers that we’ll land on
the colours that we’ll see
the beauty down below there
the fragrances that we’ll breathe
the turd pile I just landed in
just shattered all my dreams

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December 01, 2007

IrishLuck

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42	60.0% (5 votes)	28.6%

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IrishLuck reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Ah ha, that was very funny, the last part. If I were a rain drop, landing on a turd pile would surely ruin my day..and my dreams!

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December 01, 2007

_Marybeth_

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101	F	United States	December 02

_Marybeth_ reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I like this…it was funny…I would like you to make more of these poems..I like it. They really cheer me up…this one mad me laugh!

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