Poetry / words
his words
are like tiny fingers
touching me
inside out
i can feel them brush
against my skin
I am warm in a way
that been gone
far far too long
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arielspd reviewed Version 1 -
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I really enjoyed this one…nice work. One question, in the line “that been gone” should “that” be “that’s or that is”?
The opener is fantastic “his words
are like tiny fingers
touching me
inside out ” very pictorial.
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