Poetry / Creation's Creation Conversation

Why on the Wire would you wait for me?

-Why, in the beginning you were just whire

Why would you make me , can I ask?
-Why, what is the matter?

Why would you ask me when I am asking YOU?
-Why, I am wondering about your wondering, as you know.

You are my creator! You do not need to ask.
-Well, I am , certainly, but also a creation.

Why, why are you a creation?
-Why, why is one of my favorite questions, my dear creation.

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December 04, 2007

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Interesting, call me stupid but I really don’t get what this is about. Even though I don’t understand it I still like it. Will you explain it to me? Thankx for commenting on my work.

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December 01, 2007

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I enyoyed reading your work. I hope you continue on the journey of writing.

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