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Haiku/Senryu / Savor
Soft champagne mornings
Bubbles tickle me awake
Happy beginning.
Mid-day chardonay
Blossoms into lovely day
Focused, but gentle.
Sangria evenings
mixed flavors drawn from the day
Satisfy the Id.
Night-warming cognac
Stretches both my mind and soul
Drifts in peaceful rest.
Wine tempers vision
Cycles of life are aging.
Full-bodied richness.
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im_dragon_f8 reviewed Version 1 -
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This must have been a really lovely day
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Ice_Frost_Draco reviewed Version 1 -
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Hey, this was a fun selection of haikus. I think it’s cute that you used different kind of ‘drinks’ to kinda describe things that happen in life. It may just be a few words, and in truth alcohol and what not isn’t really seen as something that is good in life, since we hear a lot about drunkards and what not, but the way you used specific kinds of drinks and used what they are known for to describe life was fun and an interesting read. Thanks a lot, I liked very mucho!
nouveau_gypsy reviewed Version 1 -
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This is witty
and is starting
to make me want to get intoxicated!
very nice descriptions!
Andyoak reviewed Version 1 -
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Awsome…I really liked it….and not just cause I’m an alkie. The piece had a wonderful progression and excellent style. well done.
andymo1984 reviewed Version 1 -
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I really loved the way you move throughout the day, and thought that there is a great feeling of general happiness. Well done.
saex4u reviewed Version 1 -
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lovely but I am reading it with a hang over
1anthony reviewed Version 1 -
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Your writing is nice and smooth. Like night -warming cognac (smile).
Good Job!
steel reviewed Version 1 -
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Each “stanza” stands well alone. I like to think of this as a guide of the perfect times to drink
runnerchick2 reviewed Version 1 -
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I really think there could be a few things changed. I love the diction and the ‘ideas’ though. mid-day chardonay rhymes and messes up the “flow.” but over all great job.
a_bittersweet_tragedy reviewed Version 1 -
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Very nice. Makes me want to relax when I read it. Then it makes me feel like a wino.
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