Haiku/Senryu / Meta-Tanka

My five lines of prose
Capture a moment in time.
(Kami-no-ku ends…
Shimo-no ku begins here.)
A nostalgic memory.

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February 02, 2008

JustGeneric

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JustGeneric reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

What a great piece of writing. And it was very explanatory, which was good for me! I really enjoy reading haiku and am glad you’ve shared with us this other form of poetry. The wording was awesome and I loved the last line. Thanks so much for sharing!