ha! you make me smile
how can I publish a book when there’s all this wonderful violence happening all around me?
Haiku/Senryu / winter still life
bird’s hop prints stamp snow
cat’s swift paw burst intersects
red feathers remain
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Elron reviewed Version 1 -
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Excellent piece. Cause and effect imagery very effective. This one’s definitely a keeper. Great job.
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Soph reviewed Version 1 -
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Come on … publish that book !!!!
weepingclouds reviewed Version 1 -
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1 line awkward
forensic senryu cause ur also interpreting. reasoning overshadows feel here.
DharmaBum reviewed Version 1 -
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stream of consciousness
footprints seldom seen in summer
heels deep in hot sand
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