Haiku/Senryu / autumns's winter

Good imagery.  I would make snow melt one word, and you don’t lose anything by doing so.

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December 16, 2007

by ThomasAlan

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thanks!

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There can be only one person who wrote this … Thomas_Alan ???
I cannot say anything except shke my head and smile. Thanks

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December 16, 2007

by ThomasAlan

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should I occasionally change my age and my pre-poem notes just to be more mysterious?

Thanks again!

December 19, 2007

by Soph

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I’d still recognize your style !!! Magnificent.

December 19, 2007

by ThomasAlan

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thanks again!

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strange choice in title. im not even sure wat it meenz.

autumn’s fall may has bet conote to buried, ded, gost, n farewell.

i hope im meeting de “good crits” description. well at least i try ta b a good critter!

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December 16, 2007

by ThomasAlan

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your crits are always good

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Makes me want to cry, you know. Wonderful.

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December 15, 2007

by ThomasAlan

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awwww, don’t CRY!  but thanks, though….

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