Poetry / Ransome
Ransom
She has those
Big beautiful eyes
The kind that say
Come here!
Without moving her lips
Shaking her hips
Looking back
To make sure
I’m watching
That hot little ass
She touches me
Ever so gently
In that playful way
Claiming adoration
She knows what’s important
But I’ve seen this before
Although she doesn’t know
I’ve been taken hostage many times
She’s just another terrorist
Waiting to posses me
To use me
“Til someone
Usually me
Pays the ransom
Taylor X. (C) 5-2007
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I’m finding it hard to believe a 94 year old wrote this! Mainly because of the content.
I am instantly struck by the thoughts of this being a tease from a girlfriend. My X and I had a fun time messing with each other. The teasing was a fun part of the relationship. It keeps the relationship alive.
The very last line, about paying ransom, leads me to believe that we are talking about a lady that does this for a living. Hey strip joints are fun! It also sounds like you are the high roller out of the group of buddies you hang with. Again a plus for you!
Regardless, this is a sexy read. I dig it.
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It’s a cute little ditty and it seems the narrator’s been there before, seduced by sexy women, you’d think he’d learn! It flows rather well till the last three lines which seem awkward to me for some reason and sort of breaks the rhythm. Ransom I take is divorce settlements? Or what? Fun read overall.
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