Poetry / Bathed

No matter how many time I bath,
I can never be clean.
No matter how many time you say it,
They will never believe me.
I never told the truth, just living one big lie.
Gave you all the stories and you created my fantasy.
All of a sudden I felt light-headed and rembered who I am.
Reality is just my dream,
Some day I’ll wakeup with the standard scream.
I paid no attension to who died in my suicide.
I’m just playing in a disposable world,
Pretending to be apart of society.

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April 16, 2008

Horus

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Horus reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

Fix the spelling; otherwise it’s interesting, every sentence makes me want to read at least two more, looking forward to more poetry from you.

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