Poetry / Why Do Lips Taste Sharp in the Dark?

yeah, i reckon it isnt too smooth a transition between the last two lines but that’s how i intended it. the last  two lines are the twist. it kinda goes against my principles to completely reveal the entire meaning of my work. i feel that way because if a reader doesnt understand my work just from reading it, then i’ve kinda failed as a story-teller. but i’ll give you this: the second to last line the reason for everything, why it all happened, and the last line is the literary forehead slap like “why the fuck did i do that?!” hope that helps. thanks for the review