Lyrics / Flammable Ice

hi there,

very creative and orginal which is important/i like the song structure you used v/c/v/c/v/i think the title should be mentioned in the repeating chorus though so people will now exactly what the name of the song is/in general..nice job

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January 13, 2008

by yang

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you gave me a low score though. your compliment is now meaningless to me.

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I particularly liked the word choice you used in this. And I can definitely feel the emotion behind the words. Keep on writing good lyrics!

Its good and i can discern that you are speaking of some bittersweet relationship. My only issue is that you seem to be held quite strictly to the title i feel if you went down a lyrical line that people may not expect,when you see the title flammable ice you already have an idea of your song will be about before you’ve even started it”cut the cord of love’s support
pull the plug before it’s too late” if you went with this lyrical thread i think you would have gold.

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January 11, 2008

by yang

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=[ i kind of like going along with the title.

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I always like lyrics that don’t have to go to a specific tune to be appreciated. Your words flow really well, and some of your half-rhymes sound really good. Did you mean to spell lite like that, or is that just a typo?

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November 05, 2007

by yang

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it was a typo, i mentioned that in the notes for anyone reviewing. =/

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You should really put this on music if you haven’t already. Very well written. It’s got great potential as poetry not only as lyrics. The way you see love metaphorically as a ice is rally good:”I’d rather
burn off every little part
it’s better
than your frost bites on my heart”

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November 02, 2007

by yang

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yeah, this is a rough draft i came up with yesterday. i posted it right after making this. it’s still the first copy. i hope it’ll shine one day.

November 02, 2007

by yang

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where are my manners? thank you for your review.

November 03, 2007

by axelk

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you’re welcome :)

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