Lyrics / OMG!

You’re a prep that plays
D&D
and you’re a cool guy
wanna be
Lie lie lie your way
to the top
You’re doing so well
bragging amongst outcasts

Bitch please
The things you’ve
“done”
with these girls
no
Feed off your lies embedded in lactose
Fool yourself in illusion and relax
You’ve got your stories to make-up and sieze
and live out your fate encrypted in grease

Make up how you cheat
the GF
oh noes oh em jee
that’s enough
Pick on the emos
so much fun
Brag brag your way
to the middle
You know you are
the monkey in the middle

Bitch please
the things you
say
won’t cut it
mkay?
Feed off your lies embedded in lactose
Fool yourself in illusion and relax
You’ve got your stories to make-up and sieze
and live out your fate encrypted in grease

Deeper and deeper
dig this hole
Gossip and bullshit
say it now
louder and louder
Shit me not
You’re doing so well
pissing me off

Bitch please
the things you
say
won’t cut it
mkay?
Feed off your lies embedded in lactose
Fool yourself in illusion and relax
You’ve got your stories to make-up and sieze
and live out your fate encrypted in grease

Annoy annoy
your way to the bottom
You’re doing so well

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November 06, 2007

XxfixedheartsxX

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16	F	Langhorne, PA	November 09

XxfixedheartsxX reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

i really liked this.  im guessing you used acronyms so that you can make sure it all rhythms.  i hope im right about that cuz it seems like if i missed htat then im wrong about the whole thing

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November 07, 2007

by yang

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20	M	Sutter, CA	October 26

it was a part of the mockery actually.

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October 28, 2007

Mario007

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Mario007 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Nice little slant on the whole gansta scene. I like the way you used ‘their’ language to actually mock them back. The rhyming scheme is sound enough and the flow seems fairly fast, although at some places it gets a little bit sloppier but only for a while…
Overall its nice alright.

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October 28, 2007

by yang

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20	M	Sutter, CA	October 26

thank you for the review, but could you say were these places are that a bit a sloppier?

October 28, 2007

by Mario007

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18	M	Ireland	September 15

Yeah sure, the only place really is this verse:

Mock all of my friends
go ahead
Claim that you love’em
they’ll buy it
but if I tell them
Oh em Jee!

hope that helps

October 28, 2007

by yang

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20	M	Sutter, CA	October 26

ah, i did think it was a bit sloppy, but it was the last thing that needed to be in it. i’ll look it over and try to neaten it up, thank you.

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