Poetry / Poetry is Easier
You’re a stranger here don’t you know you always wanted to believe the world was strong too but it turns out everything you may have feared is more than fact or fiction it’s the heartbeat of a sunken land, a mercy fuck of human filth who sits quietly and
waits for him you’re a stranger here don’t you know that sound downstairs of fake laughter and beer is only sick enough to shut the door not runaway not slice the noise you may have given up
on people but that wind you sing never whispers back only lets you down there’s no golden answer in the sky or reason why you stay so far but when it falls oh love you’ll let them down, you hate that sound I know you do.
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Wow! That’s quite an eyefull and mouthful! Not sure why you chose this form to experiment with, but it’s interesting. ”a mercy fuck of human filth”—again, Wow! I like that phrase for sure. But, is there a reason for using this form? Not sure I care for the style, but I do like what you are saying.
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