Flash Fiction / Laura Tab, Tab for Short

Very cool. After reading your review, I know exactly what you were writing about, but if this were to stand alone, would people be able to tell? I know part of the suspense of flash fiction is to keep it ambiguous, but my only suggestion is to add in a word or two to get people thinking about the possibility that you are not necessarily talking about a drug.
But I’m really nitpicking here. A very fine flash fiction debut.

HA! Ironic, that a woman and a pill could have the same effect. I liked your flash fiction. I had never heard of it before, but it doesnt seem to need alot to say alot. You should write more.

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January 28, 2008

by cakfucius

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Thanks for the review

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Good piece, the emotion and positive information about what happened at the begginning and “Cunning little bitch” at the end provide a contrast of language that gives this piece a unique feel. Nice.

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January 25, 2008

by cakfucius

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Glad you liked it. Did you read it as a relationship with a woman or did you see it as a guy with an addiction, or do you think it could work as both. Thanks again for the kind words.

January 25, 2008

by nosebleed

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I guess it could definitely be either, but I thought of it as a girl.

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A very short, raw piece and look into this man’s subconscious, focusing on his relationship. I wish you would go more into the character and what happened in actions and dialogue instead of just stand alone thought. But it’s good for what it is. It does make me wonder though.

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January 25, 2008

by cakfucius

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29	M	Social Circle, GA	August 27

Thanks for the review. Wanted to try nanofiction and write what I know, and I wrote about drug addiction. It does need to be longer but just wanted to try something new.

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