Humor/Satire / Have You Ever(reborn) # 1
Have you ever been skiing and was told that you had some spinach in your teeth from lunch, and while searching for a toothpick in your coat jacket you ran into a tree?
Problem solved. Isn’t a tree just an oversized toothpick anyway?
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Ba dum pum, ching! There is money in joke writing, I suppose.
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The initial setup of “being told you have some spinach in your teeth,” while skiing doesn’t really make any sense; it seems like a physically unlikely thing to happen, and that makes the rest of the joke not work very well.
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This was hilarious, although your premise is somewhat flawed- I don’t really think people have conversations when skiing; at least I haven’t seen that occur.
It was definately entertaining. I think the punchline would be better if you had just said “Problem solved” and let the reader connect the final lines. I wasn’t too bad. Got a mild tee hee.
I don’t think someone would tell you that you have spinach in your teeth when your skiing but that was funny.
haha, very cute. shouldnt this go under flash fiction though
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