Limericks / Charles Manson Limericks
I saw the look in his eye
He looks like a pretty fun guy
He killed Sharon Tate
He’s filled with much hate
and he’s only 5 feet high
-Rob
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You rhyming pattern was on target, but the feet in the poem are off. Lines 1, 2, and 5 should be written in anapestic trimeter and lines 3 and 4 in anapestic dimeter.
Great topic…keep it up! I’d love to see a revised version of this!
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funny. no corrections. i hope the second line is sarcastic though
Your meter seems good, your syllables are short on most lines. It’s a clever little ditty though. It seems like you need a little more “punch” in your punchline though. Really hit us with something ultra disturbing about Charles Manson!
Charles Manson is not worth the talent wasted in this quick limerick. The Sharon Tate line is cold.
It’s five “feet”
Charlie thought he was neat
The chicks thought him real sweet
He didn’t care
if he got the chair
But the case, his lawyers beat
Now..who writes a limerick about this jerk? I was in California when it happened.
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