Limericks / Tsunami
I saw the news about Thailand
I’m very glad it’s not my land
they got really wet
the worst you can get
They should have run for the high land.
-Rob
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Quite amusing, you should try doing more to make other world disasters taken abit more light hearted. But be careful, you can easily offend in that area.
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Pretty rough topic for the light-hearted limerick!
Your rhyme scheme is perfect, but the feet per line doesn’t match that of the limerick.
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Hahaha!!!!
naughty, naughty and naughty…
Had good laugh…
ROFL. insensitively funny. my kind of humor. no corrections xD
Well you went with an 88558 syllable count, but your meter seems fine. If you’re going to use periods then you should use them consistently throughout so it doesn’t read like one run-on sentence. Your rhymes are clever though. Not sure the people of Thailand would appreciate, but oh well.
Dear Writer,
This was a nice attempt at some sickly sardonic wit I’ll give you that. The execution was lacking a bit but I expelled a small chuckle.
Cheers!
R
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