Limericks / Limericks from the Left #8
This country has been plunged into debt.
But the President says not to fret.
We can keep on spending
Since China keeps lending
And the dollar isn’t worthless yet.
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First line’s a little off, rhythm-wise, but – as always – you’re the epitome of pith. :)
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Great topic, rhyming, and syllables, but the syllables that are supposed to be accented and unaccented need to be reworked. Every third syllable should be accented…the others unaccented.
This one, though, was still fun to read!
Love it, love it, love it.
I like the whimsical touch you put to this serious issue. It’s cute (in a political sort of way). I like the rhymes and the syllable count. Good job!
Great!! Very funny. Flowed smoothly, and the words ring true. Great job!!
Clever. Though I think we returned all of the lead toys to China and that didn’t do them any favors. I think we owe billions to Japan as well… and Dubai owns most of the NASDAQ now…
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