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Limericks / Limericks from the Left #10
CEO’s get paid millions each year
Just for making good jobs disappear.
Cutting fringes and pay
The American way
Through outsourcing, illegals and fear.
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Another interesting presentation of your viewpoints. :) The rhythm and rhyme are good. The only nit to pick is that you don’t need the apostrophe in “CEO’s”.
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brahmasong reviewed Version 2 -
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hi!
it’s me,the guy that you asked me not to review you or something like that.
this piece is alot tighter and really stays on point,and in reading this one,the last three lines seem to race you of too its conclussion…very well done.
one suggestion?
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Cutting fringes and pay
The American way
Through outsourcing, illegals and fear.
this is very good,but what if you did this with it?
Cutting fringes and pay’s
The American way
Through outsourcing, illegals and fear.
doesn’t that kinda mooth it out just a little bit more?
please reply…thanx!
ScottBJohnson reviewed Version 1 -
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Well said. This is exactly why we are having things like the current writer’s strike.
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