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AGE: 25
LOC: Beverly Hills, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 10

So my name is J. Melton and i am an aspiring author. I am currently working on my first piece of work which is a novel that is untitled at the moment even though i do have a few ideas for it.  It is about a man who has recently been down on his luck but has a life changing moment on his way to work one day when he saves a young mans life.  The kid who he saved is going to grow up to do great things for christianity and due to this God feels it necessary to help out our main character through the rest of his life making all his wishes come true.  There are twists and turns throughout and it promises to be a good read.  

You can check out some excerpts from my book on my myspace page at www.myspace.com/meltonbooks

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Poetry / Jack
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9 Reviews   3 Comments
He's the only one that's there for me When life makes me so unhappy He makes ugly girls seem pretty Thank the Lord for Jack He helps you forget about the past He gets you drunk really fast He'll gladly knock you on your ass Thank the Lord for Jack Gentleman Jack some people say When he comes to make their day I would never give him away Thank the Lord for Jack So if you see Jack take him home He will never leave you alone Just sip on him til he's all gone Thank the Lord for Jack www.myspace.c...
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Version 1
13 Reviews   11 Comments
A Hooker Haiku Found a sidewalk slut Hundred dollars gets you laid Can't pass on that deal A Hooker Haiku Pt. 2 Fuck, it was a cop My wife is gonna kill me What a disaster
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Poetry / Life?
cool poem. dont really know how to critique it because its the first of the kind that ive read. but you did a nice job with the first and second lines of each paragraph making them mesh with the two variant third lines.
Poetry / Further Ablaze
i think you should change forever's to forever is. i think it would make that part flow better. other than that i think you did a fabulous job.
Short Story / Future on a Park Bench
Locked
i didnt really understand why you kept using the double question marks ?? throughout your story. you had them at the beginning of sentences and places where there were no questions. other than that i thought it was well written and the story was captivating.
Short Story / The Jobber (pt 2)
“Your son has Malaria” you need some kind of punctuation here. very short but i read your first part too and it fits nicely. still very good with the clarity.
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