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AGE:
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LOC: Redding, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 16
LOC: Redding, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 16
i’ve been writing blogs for a while on myspace without much response. Found this page, thought i would see if i could rape a few minds on here.
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My eyes were gasping for breath as the bus lazily rolled around the corner onto 5th street. I'm not sure if the bus was being lazy, or if the sporific nature of the day anthropomorphized everything into sleepiness. My head was resting up against the glass of the bus. The temperature had dropped since this morning so this soft pillow of ice was making my temples cold. I pulled myself away from the magnetism that holds your head to a pillow in the morning and sat back in the bus chair. Nothing ...
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drying my hair i had an argument with the shower floor today. I was sitting there all cold, even with the warm water hugging me. I looked down and the water had amassed into a form that looked exactaly like a smile. "what the fuck are you smiling at?" i asked but calmly like you would ask an inanimate object. It just sat there silently, smile not fading. The smile was special though, it was one where you could see the knowledge behind the eyes. The kind of smile you give to a child when you s...
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"I understand now." I said as i wrapped my lips around the bong and sucked the life out of it. "you understand what?" Tim asked as i haphazardly handed him the bond and lighter. He took it and i leaned back and finally let the smoke come twisting out of my mouth. "I don't know what were we talking about?" I said not caring. "Nothing." The word came out sailing on the waves of smoke from his mouth. "I don't remember." "What are you doing tomorow?" he asked me whil looking out the passenger win...
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I enjoyed this very much. with one simple paragraph you have shown much depth to the people. the only suggestion i could make is to mention that frank saw you trying to sketch the bird, which is the reason he noticed it. I don't know if that's what really happened but i just assumed it because then he really is an asshole.
hah i think this is near the epitome of what blog should be, random thoughts mutating into coherent bloviation. Some of your metaphors were terrific. never heard the song, but random thought blister in the sun is the perfect title for this. you should go off on some of your random thoughts like you did for the beer drinking sport. what does a random thought like pigs orgasming for 45 minutes lead your to?
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