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LOC: United States
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LAST LOGIN: August 28
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 28
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Writing is my dreams coming alive
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Love, Faith, Passion Life's greatest gifts.
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When Sam and I had finished going through Aaron's and Casey's clothes and stuff, we decided that we would move into a smaller place. With just the two of us we certainly didn't need a two story, four bedroom home. And besides, it was so lonesome and the house seemed so empty without them. We found a nice one story house near the gym right off the main street and after we had settled in, and since it was spring, we had a huge open house party. Everyone came, even Caleb. It was a blast and I o...
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The first few days of 'Silence' were pretty busy, with everyone getting settled and all the elite soldiers, including myself, were unpacking some of the weapon crates and checking out the annihilation, semi-automatic machine pistols or 'death guns', as we had all nicknamed them. They were so fucking cool! I couldn't wait to try one of them out. But since we were in 'Silence' mode, we had to wait till we were outside to shoot them. Of course, we would have to wait a couple more months, once th...
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Prologue: It was a dark rainy lighting filled night as she lay dying in her bed. The shards of glass from the pitcher embedded deeply in her flesh and organs. How could he have done this, was her last thought on this God forsaken earth. Part One: The streets were wet with rain from the hellish storm the night before. My partner and I stopped in front of the beautiful old brownstone building where the victim lived. We had just gotten the call, as we were headed out for the day on another murde...
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Really well written! Good descriptions and a captive story line. Can't wait to read more. CAT
Well written and intriguing. There are a few things I would change: 1.Once her discomfiture eased, her eyes....(I would change discomfiture to discomfort. It's easier to understand IMO.) 2.She is not naïve, nor is she is she moving ahead...(Repeated yourself in this one) 3.(these three sentence about Ari should be brought together in just one or two sentences): Still, she belonged with Ari. He didn’t like the idea that Ari was going to be hurt. He knew how much Ari loved his sister. I've read...
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