metaku's profile

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AGE: 49
LOC: Westlake Village, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 02

You can call me John
the name that I was born with
normal as water

gathering visions
nature holds my mind open
I may be insane

I love reading here
urbis nurtures great talents
shining like mirrors

Being no expert
I write very few reviews
mostly back-slapping

My skill is haiku
five-seven-fiving along
bright edges of clouds

Here are my best works
haiku/senryu tanka
American style
Tell me how I can improve
their palatability

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Haiku/Senryu / Exquisite Torture
Version 1
10 Reviews   0 Comments
Howls leap into shrieks! Without mercy he squeezes the whoopie cushion.
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Haiku/Senryu / Rainball
Version 1
2 Reviews   0 Comments
sun tumbles through tear in dark sky brief rainbow
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Haiku/Senryu / ByTiny Pond
Version 2
1 Review   0 Comments
Dancing on the breeze Willow stretches over pond Writing in ripples
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Haiku/Senryu / Free By Nature
Version 1
3 Reviews   0 Comments
vivid brevity kissing poets open palm haiku butterfly nectar energy meaning in every movement held to high standard understanding dawn yellow blue red butterfly reading violets mind
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Haiku/Senryu / THE SAD OLD HAIJIN
Version 1
3 Reviews   1 Comment
Too many voices Haiku police shut them down Everyone suffers Stained reputation Asterisk by the footnote Dwell in infamy Only Gunsaku Loved unconditionally Dawn the Meta-Muse Heaven won't have me Arthritic Fist of Justice Ignored all the rules Join the evening sky Immortal with human flaws Night calls other stars
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Poetry / I cut to feel no pain
by Wade
Locked
Quotes / Joker
by Dan_Vito
Locked
Poetry / But Him
by newbie
Deeply insightful, well written. No suggestions for change.
Poetry / My Choice, Nicotine
by Big_D
Beautifully written disturbingly insightful Deserving my tens
Haiku/Senryu / Haiku
by Doctor_Rat
I don't see the connection between lines one and two. Overall a 7.
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