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LOC: Toledo, OH
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 29
LOC: Toledo, OH
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 29
An aspiring musican and artist. Pretty obvious, don’t you think? ;)
“Knowledge is what the world teaches us. Wisdom is what we teach the world.” ~ Brandon Harris
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The Mourning - You came in tonight.. I had only a few.. I closed my eyes Only to see yours Piercing into my soul I pounded down a few more just a few... In my moment of grief You looked at me As if you knew You smiled I smiled only a few more... I heard you say my name I opened my eyes to see but only caught a glimpse of gold and crystal I pick you up I drink you away just a few more.. Stumbling to your beauty I hear only your voice I feel only your touch Nothing matters now I put it to my mo...
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"U" and "I" spells "We" Verse 1: I can feel you starin' back at me when I turn my back to leave Just one more kiss, is all you need from me, to make your heart beleive Pre-Chorus: And if you let me to it I would never learn It was you, it was you who held the keys you never turned I don't want to do it but my body starts to turn it's responding to the motion of your body as it yearns Chorus: I'm two steps from "I" and all I need is "me" but "me" and "I" will never learn that "U" and "I" spell...
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"U" and "I" spells "We" Verse 1: I can feel you starin' back at me when I turn my back to leave Just one more kiss, is all you need from me, to make your heart beleive Pre-Chorus: I don't want to do it but my body starts to turn it's responding to the motion of your body as it yearns and if you let me to it I would never learn It was you, it was you who held the keys you never turned Chorus: I'm two steps from "I" and all I need is "me" but "me" and "I" will never learn that "U" and "I" spell...
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(Verse 1) there's red lights in the corners they're blinking violently my eyes begin to focus I squint so I can see when I come around a flash of sound, it rings so vividly my life flash right before my eyes I'm gone in the count of three (Verse 2) the pavement tells me stories of not too long ago black stripes turn the pages sending me to vertigo I loose my concentration where I am, I do not know the last thing I remember is the ringing of my phone (Verse 3) The air goes slight, my blood goe...
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Omega Amor The morning sun comes shinin' through, it grabs at me in bed the light creeps right across the floor, trys t'devour what's in my head I just try to stay asleep, where my nothing is my life my concious goes to tackle me, I have to struggle to stay alive The little images are meaningless, they twist and they distort what fragments that are left behind, I gather and I sort I get up and see your pillow, it is empty and I sigh I'd like to try and smile (try to smile), but I know it's ju...
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This really captures the essence of making love, from a womans perspective (I'm a man btw hah), but yes. I can understand the feeling of loosing yourself in the act, and really just breathing in someone and becoming something more. I really like this poem and hope you come out with some more. It's always refreshing to see things from a womans perspective.
I love the rhythmic pattern with the honey, it's unique. There's so many times in life that we all are struggling to get somewhere. Very true lyrics, they ring a certain tone in my ears and I love this. I like the honesty in the lyrics, it's almost like reading someones brain. Very nice, I love it.
I like the layout of this song, though I think you should add a bridge or something else to spice up the song a little, VCVCVC is a good pattern, but definitely throwing in some change really spices up how the song comes out. I like the lyrics the most for the song, they're very raw and can connect with a feeling that a lot of us get. Very nice
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