missf410's profile
AGE:
26
LOC: South Bend, IN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 18
LOC: South Bend, IN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 18
Hello! Thank you for taking the time to review my profile. I look forward to meeting new people, reviewing others, and getting those constructive critiques back.
My current writing bent is within the romance genre. I am writing paranormals right now. I do have a few ideas for historicals and plain old contemporaries. I also have a few ideas for fantasy novels. I’m just full of them these days. ;)
Thanks again! I hope you’ll come back again!
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Live reality. Write fiction. Change worlds.
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My Butterfly Tale They liked to see the birds go by, But Inky and Binky wanted to fly. In these days planes were unheard of And they didn’t have wings like the birds above. They wished that dreams came true. Then, the next day, they found out they do. The street vendor cried that his rugs could be bought And they got one without a thought. They took it to a picnic in the park. It was many hours before dark. Inky wanted to leave, But Binky pulled on his sleeve. He looked around and saw...
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PROLOGUE Strobe lights flashed quickly matching the beat of the music. The dance floor was crowded with dancing, sweaty bodies. The smell of sweat was heavy in the air and tinged by the elusive smell of sex. She moved sensuously to the beat catching the attention of more than one man. Excusing herself from her latest dance partner she moved through the mass of bodies to her table just off the dance floor. Her friends were flirting with a couple of guys they had met that night. “...
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PROLOGUE Strobe lights flashed quickly matching the beat of the music. The dance floor was crowded with dancing, sweaty bodies. The smell of sweat was heavy in the air and tinged by the elusive smell of sex. She moved sensuously to the beat catching the attention of more than one man. Excusing herself from her latest dance partner she moved through the mass of bodies to her table just off the dance floor. Her friends were flirting with a couple of guys they had met that night. “...
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It is kind of funny in a geeky way and did make me smile a little. It is true though. My mom always says that if you feel the same way about the person your with, as you felt right at first with the whole 'rush', after you find out they leave the toilet seat up a thousand times and want your opinion on if they look fat in that, then you are truly in love.
In the first quote you should add an 's' to trusts. The second quote I don't understand the clauses together. The first clause I really like. The third quote is nice. I like it.
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