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AGE: 22
LOC: Layton, UT
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 03

My true loves in life are music and literature. Otherwise, not a whole lot left to know about me. Although, if you have an questions for me, feel free to ask.

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Poetry / Drawn to You
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When sensuality breaks our breathing, we tremble against each other in anticipation. Our lips move to brush, but barely touch as the feeling builds. Hesitations and tension, until our lips attract like magnets, crashing together and breaking the intense.
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Poetry / Lullaby
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Sing me to sleep with your sweet words and melodies. Lull me to dreams with your songs. Curl up against me, your arms tight around me, your voice in my hair, and hold me ‘til night takes us in.
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Poetry / Roses
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The sun shined inappropriately as they all gathered around you. I stood back, keeping my distance, sick over the fact I wasn’t there to rescue you. When it came down to it, I couldn’t be found. You needed me, and I had nothing to give. Now all I can offer you is a bouquet of roses to rest in your still hands as they cover you up.
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Poetry / The "L" Word
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Staying up late at night, you on the other end, making me giggle because I’ve never felt like this before. I know it’s too soon to be saying these things, but I feel them. You make me smile, like no one has ever smiled. I hold my breath, waiting for the next time we speak, because you excite me.
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Hello, dear friend. How have you been? I want you to know, I’m not angry anymore, but the missing still lingers. Maybe it ain’t me babe, but I’ll always wish it was. Once, upon a time, there was a chance for us, but that’s long past. When you slip that flower behind your ear, think of me, and remember me fondly. Cradle your baby, cling to your wife, and grasp all of the happiness that’s just waiting for you. Goodbye.
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I love this. The incorporation and slight alteration of known phrases to emphasize your point is very enticing. Word choice and flow add a lot of beauty to your piece. A very beautiful write- one I'm glad that I came across.
Poetry / Lesson Learned.
Wow, this is very short, but it packs a punch. I really like that you've written this and given it such a jarring feel. An excellent write! Ash
Poetry / Untitled
I like this. It's definitely a clever piece. The internet references are really great. Fantastic work.
Very melancholy, but very serene in a way. I can't really describe it. It's very good. . . so much in fact, that I really don't know what else to say! Great job.
Poetry / Time
This one is my favorite. Very empowering, and very nostalgic. We all long for innocence at times in our lives, and you've captured that feeling so well in this. A more tender piece, but still with the element of strength. Beautiful work.
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