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AGE:
24
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 15
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 15
My name is Keith and I am very passionate about literature. I like to write poetry, short stores and novellas, however my main interest lies primarily with poetry at the moment. I am interested in poetry that actually says something and that actually asks questions of the reader, not the stuff that says “this is me and this is how it is” I find that that kind of over personalized drama alienates the reader from finding their own interpretation of your work. I also like the use of rhythm, rhyme and beats within poetry, and how structure can be used effectively to reflect emotion.
I am not a big fan of when people say “oh I hate rhyming poetry, its just childish and unsophisticated”. To me it really doesn’t matter how you present your …
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I feel frustrated Incomprehensibly confused Perturbed, unable to collate My head is full of nothing, and empty of everything, a hole has formed in my mind I am lost Indirectly misled Inadvertently detached Words enter, and echoes leave Heavy, vacant head I am scared, alone, confused I neglect my own departments Misconduct my recollection, Coffee breathed and disconcerted Misdirect my information Found a place and then misplaced Blanket faced and blinded features I feel fine despite my ailment...
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I share my bed with my girlfriend I shared my room with my brother at ten My lounge is open to everyone My kitchen's been graced by my mum I shared my garden with a flock of birds And in my poems I share my words My mind I share with my councillor My saddest times with my sister Fishing trips I share with dad And naughty jokes when with the lads My objections I will share with anyone And my guidance when with my son My advice I share with friends Prostate problems shared with men I share my w...
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Melted ice always drains Warn hearts start to fray Like apples fall from the tree Or sunlight fades to grey Metal always rusts in water Rivers always slide away Broken glass always splinters Warn hearts start to fray
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Oh tranquility of my poster A place to reconcile my agitation To sandy shores please take me When I wake and the rain grates my window All but disposed of, all but gone Take me on your boat Let me escape My claustrophobic office cell When I wake must I still be asleep To dream of blues as true as yours Let me lose myself inside of you May I take the time to believe That maybe there is something more When I see your distant shores I long for nothing more
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I feel frustrated Incomprehensibly confused Perturbed, unable to collate My head is full of nothing, and empty of everything, a hole has formed in my mind I am lost Indirectly misled Inadvertently detached Words enter, and echoes leave Heavy, vacant head I am scared, alone, confused I neglect my own departments Misconduct my recollection, Coffee breathed and disconcerted Misdirect my information Found a place and then misplaced Blanket faced and blinded features I feel fine despite my ailment...
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I like this poem because I think it evokes the type of emotion that is so often avoided in poetry these days, a feeling of nostalgia, and a sense of effervescent emotion. I liken your style to that of Keats and Wordsworth. Your approach is very mature for someone who is still so young.
This is a nice little piece, I like that doesn't overtly state that you are talking directly about the vampires of legend. It is possible for the reader to view the descriptive quality of the piece as lamenting upon vampirism fetishism. Overall, I like the pace, and despite being brief it manages to conjure distinctive imagery within the reader's mind.
I can see the sentiment is clear in this poem, and the words are sincere. I think there is definitely a good subject matter to work on here as the truest emotion is that which is raw. However, structurally I feel that this poem is lacking. I think that you would certainly be able to work around that however, and find a nice concise reflection of your emotion. Maybe if you place each stanza in beats, this would create a sense of rhythm that I feel is missing. Overall, I really like the sentime...
I can imagine you at the bottom of a balcony with nothing but your heart and a sleeve where you keep it. This poem is something of an ode, and it is always refreshing to see something quite lifting amongst a backdrop of heavy metaphor, and desperation that is so often used.
Another vivid poem. I like your ability to evoke a weather condition inside me with your poems. This one made me feel warm and peacefull. You evoke a sense of easily relatable nostalga with this piece.
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