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AGE:
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LOC: Willits, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 29
LOC: Willits, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 29
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it's the middle of the night i should be sleepin' shattered but my worries won 't leave me alone shattered so i sit here weepin my bills are due my babies are cryin but all i can do shattered is watch my heart in it's dyin shattered my whole life in peices on the floor no putting this mess together again shattered cause love's walked out my door cause this time's really the end shattered lord what is this hurtin for why couldn't i just bend shattered..................
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my life as a cloud airborn only fearful of towering mountains my life as a mountain earthborn olny fearful of relentless waves my life as a wave waterborn only fearful of thoughtless men my life as a man fireborn only fearful of air earth and water
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my life as a cloud airborn only fearful of towering mountains my life as a mountain earthborn olny fearful of relentless waves my life as a wave waterborn only fearful of thoughtless men my life as a man only fearful of air earth and water
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i have seen the fire of desire i have tasted the ice of revenge i have walked the dead man's road i held another's life in my hands would pray to God i could go back but i'm sure i'd do it again i'm sure my actions were all wronge when the system failed a righteous man i've walked accross this land from sea to shining sea i've seen the darkness i've seen the light paying it forward and might makes right poor feeding destitute the corruption of a child God's wonders i've seen the devil's hand ...
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the rain has stop but the trees are still crying red moon rising the lights are on in the house where i'm not welcome so i listen to the frogs sing you know what i mean it's a lonely night he's changed the lock on the door and i can't remember what i came here for so i'll walk away to look for a brighter day i'm not leavig love behind just some old lang zign gonna find me a new dream you know what i mean deafened by a fire roaring out of control i didn't hear the bell toll but fire and ice o...
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i like the flow of this. with each piece left behind you can almost feel the emotion, the fragility of this person.
this is wonderful. the reader wants desperately for the boys to be found, or maybe find their way to something better. yet when they are found the anxiety isn't lifted, just slightly less urgent. i only had a little difficulty with the vernacular, but not enough to stop reading. bravo.
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