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AGE:
20
LOC: Bellevue, NE
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 19
LOC: Bellevue, NE
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 19
Hey well I guess you already know my name although I have a lot of variations depending upon the work I’m doing, For now it is Moonlitjade, it may change when and if I get published, Anyways so yeah right now I am currently revamping the novel The Sapphire Dagger, I have been getting a lot of Suggestions and am now deciding to use them So if you are an avid reader of the Sapphire Dagger and are wondering when the next installment will be, I am sorrty but please be patient it will be a while and I will try to put it up in small pieces cuz i know people hate to read really long items so I will keep them short, Anyways if you do not know I am now on summer break but I also have a job so I do not know how often I will be on so if you need to…
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Walking among hallowed halls That were once filled with tumultuous laughter Now Silent I feel alone In a world too big for me to conquer Hearing the single sound of maniacal laughter is comforting if only for a moment but then the ghosts of people once cherished hear the musical vibrations coming from deep within my throat and the chaos of noise stops and waits silently as I wander aimlessly through life deep within my thoughts I do not listen as the silence settles in A victim ...
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Demons Dancing Creatures prancing All across the diamond lit sky I feel like I could fly Love at my side While death waits in pitted strife Among the shadows he hides Fearing all but those who willingly enter the depths of his realm
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Roses Painted Red, Painted Pink. Each color so unique To the meaning each rose gives. To the crier, the lover, The only one other Each rose gives its own scent to every person Meaning different things in different parts of life Death, Love, Life, Sorrow Each rose a heart borrows Only so a moment so that before it's there, it's gone And before we see it's us out, It's gone, a sliver of gold in a world so green It leaves not a streak as it too fades into the m...
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Our Favorite Song Blares on the Radio Your Eyes fall refusing to look at me Again the roses are scattered across the floor Mingled with shattered glass and Blood My eyes close to see your face again I can't seem to let go of your tears The one's that are always there Looking at me at a relationship that could have been but never will be A ring Now may seperate us for life But forever you may call me anytime anywhere Call me up Drunk I promise I won't get pissed, nor will I hang up I'll be the...
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Jaded Colors gilded gold fade away as the sun grows old The moon, there no more, Has left a hole, for horror To invade my mind Like a wild boar Blissful silence is all I seek while reminiscing about that small creek where, when we met our eyes locked and Jaded colors faded as the sun grew old
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Im captured by this poem. It is both intriguing and interesting enough to read several times over. Yet there is something deeper within this poem. You have made this poem into an enigma that only you know the true answer to. I have read it ten times over just to take in the pure emotion that flows through your poem, and still I havent fully taken it in. Beyound being well written, the poem also leaves something to be desired as far as the definite gender of the author. You cannot tell from wh...
Im not much for a fan of Haikus, but this one is good, it has personality to it, I think its the extractor fan whining maybe.
I like it, It is dark but with a hint of humanity to it (ok a lot of humanity) I like how you describe the corpse to the city. Definitely a keeper of a metaphor. Again I really like it
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