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AGE: 47
LOC: Burlington, VT
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 28

So far all of the writing that I have submitted came from my myspace blog.(And I would love to see a spellcheck button included in the blogging setup)If you want a more complete look at who I am , check out my profile on myspace.

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Humor/Satire / Ben & Jerry's Q&A
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32 Reviews   4 Comments
Should Ben& Jerry's be a controlled substance? "YES, and it should be controlled by me. How many servings are there in one pint? "Well the container says 4 but every real woman knows that that is a bold faced lie, that there is only one serving per container and it is mine, hers, no, mine ." Back OFF! I HAVE a SPOON and I KNOW how to USE IT!!!!!! Do you keep B&J in your house at all times? "For medicinal purposes only." When should you seek proffesional help for your addiction? a) When you c...
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Poetry / Tonite
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4 Reviews   1 Comment
Tonight as the sun went down, So did my heart, Sinking below sea level, Tonight , it's me and the ocean, And the ocean is a hungry devil!
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Poetry / WHY
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4 Reviews   1 Comment
word stained lips, a salted tongue, stuck into your wound, it's venom spreads. if it reaches the branch that leads to your heart, you could be down for a few min, or a few years............. muddling thru a twilight called , WHY?
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Haiku/Senryu / personals
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7 Reviews   3 Comments
One lonely otter , seeks 'nother otter to slide down river banks with, dine on shellfish and gaze at the stars while floating on a bed of liquid velvet..........
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3 Reviews   2 Comments
The Viet Nam Poem The ghosts of Viet Nam rise and walk again while you sleep you are watching the unspeakable movielike and your mouth fills with sand the dawn brings you home to american shores with your heart wrung out and your body exhausted and no matter how many times I beg you to come home again you are pulled back, looking for something that you lost a long,long time ago.
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Poetry / Mom
I enjoyed this poem , it was like eating a warm cookie,while baking a batch before everyone gets up out of bed as a nice surprise.
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Logos 1.1
I always try to weasel out of the more gruesome parts of an execution scene. So I am stopping here , feeling disturbed and alarmed by your writing, which is excellent by the way.If the correct way to evaluate writing is to see whether or not you acheived certain goals as far as influencing the reactions of the reader,then I would have to say that you have an extremely successful piece of writing on your hands. Truly creepy!Has the FBI investigated you YET?
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Family Secrets Part 5
I thought that this was a thoughtful and well written piece of work.The characters are warm and playful and I found it easy to read and want to read more. In the middle of an extremely normal setting there are these allusions to the paranormal and they mesh well. Write on.
Poetry / Elegy for Krist
The descriptions are poetic, but is it in a poetry format and I just don't get that? I love the depth from which the writing came.
Novel Treatments / Code poem
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