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LOC: Camilla, GA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 09
LOC: Camilla, GA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 09
“A mirror only knows your reflection, but God knows your soul.”
From the small town of Pelham, to the bright lights of the boxing ring and back, Jeffrey Murray has taken some incapacitating blows, but now he is ALIVE. The biography of a young man who discovered himself, through the hatred of people and the love of God is now available for you to experience. You can’t miss what many have called the single most insightful look into a world of racial tension and how the love of our creator can help overcome all odds. Georgia’s two time Boxing State Champion; alive, loving, and the truth…. He is Jeffrey Murray!
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(THE BEGINNING) Thursday, twenty years ago, a rage of pure hell was ignited within my mental capacity from racial broadcastings of black people struggles in America. Blacks were tortured, brutally beaten, murdered, and the raping of black women generation after generation was the great fulfilling life to the whites who were so determined that any other way for blacks to live would be disgusting, unsatisfactory, irrelevant, or just down right insane. I was eight years old as I continued to wat...
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I think you lose flow of the poem immediately after.... you said drew them to my breast.... (like a blown glass rose cotton candy thin) should be revised to where it would be simple but still effective.
I like this but I think it should be named Sweet Thong instead of Ode to Underwear.
Great poem. I enjoyed it but I think right at the end you over emphasize by dubbing WHERE DID ALL THOSE YESTERDAY'S GO?
This poem is nice but inspiration as the title doesn't fit this piece for me... I think it should be called Courageous being that it mentions taking a chance of wanting to fly and soar.
I would change the order of Batter Up: give batters hope, ambidextrous picture benched-- baseball bat swings, crack To me it now seems more effective.
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