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AGE: 21
LOC: South Point, OH
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 27

I like to think of myself as a very open minded person and enjoy learning new things. I am currently working on piecing together a book about life, drugs and how to succeed with them.

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Non-fiction / Letting Fear Go
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Fear.....We all experience this feeling, and for most of us, it overpowers us at some point in our lives, and for some of us, all of our lives. Fear in and of itself isn't negative. It's the reaction to the fear that “can” be negative. When one experiences fear, the first reaction is to shy away from whatever triggered the fear. This reaction just gives power to the fear. What you resist will persist! So in order for you to overcome a fear, you must first know what it is that you fear, and wh...
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Poetry / A Heart To Heart
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My Heart, My pain My heart is real, the pain is there Where to begin?-What to do? Give love, Take love My heart is real, the pain is there Is it going to end?-Am I still me? Be love, Receive love My heart is real, the pain is there Don’t fret-Don’t regret It’s my heart, it’s my pain My heart is real, the pain is real Am I in control?-Do I have a choice? Yes and Yes My heart is real, the pain is real I let go-I fell in love I’m in control! My heart is real, the pain is real I choose to live-so...
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Poetry / Done With It
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My mind goes round and round stuck on the same old sound Coke, Crack, Pot, and all the other drugs crawling around inside my head like a load of bugs Okay, I'm done with that now The cruel intentions of old times past it feels like an Arctic Blast love is there but time no more its bone chilling to the core Okay, I'm done with that now
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Poetry / Death
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DEATH Your Dying Year, your Dying Day, your Dying Hour, your Dying Minute, your Dying Now, and your Dead. Did you know this was your Year to Die? Did you wake up and know this was your Day to Die? Did you live as if you were to Die? What is Death? You now know, but all of us still alive have yet to know. We Weep, we Rejoice, we Argue, we Love, we Regret, but we Don’t Know. What is Death? Is it an end to existence? If so than that means you no longer exist. Is that Death? Is it an end to life?...
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Fear.....We all experience this feeling, and for most of us, it overpowers us at some point in our lives, and for some of us, all of our lives. Fear in and of itself isn't negative. It's the reaction to the fear that “can” be negative. When one experiences fear, the first reaction is to shy away from whatever triggered the fear. This reaction just gives power to the fear. What you resist will persist! So in order for you to overcome a fear, you must first know what it is that you fear, and wh...
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I didn't understand whats going on here. If you would give the reader some context to go on it would improve this. If this is just a phrase than i suppose it would work like it is(though i do not really know). What was the trigger for this piece? I think it needs some additional wording and explanations. But maybe it is how you like it.
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I thought this was nice. it is a very interesting way of putting the feelings that are going on inside of your head(if they are about you). Learning to swim: that is so true. I myself felt the same way about the past. I let the feelings get so deep it felt like a giant lake. Thanks for writing this. It made me realize that it,s not a dam needed but a release of pressure. Again thanks.
Poetry / American Dream
You know, i am pretty new myself. I enjoyed this far more than i can express. You did a wonderful job of getting me to assosiate with wat you are trying to express. If it were for me to grade i would give you a B. Not n A becaus you didn't use grammer and puntuation to the best ability(i don't know specifics)(i screw up with it so much i hardly know what is right). I am sorry if this doesnt meet good scrutiny standads but i wanted to le you know you have a very desciptive and positive start. ...
That was one story. You have a way with words that bring exicetment into the mnd and body. This is very good. I am not very good with grammer but i didn't have any problems reading this, at all.
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